3rd paragraph

today we were picking up where we left yesterday on the 3rd paragraph because we had finished the 2nd one before. After i finished my paragraph i reviewed it and saw many errors so i used a red pen to marl them out and also this is very useful for the future when im writing essays or applications for collages so ill know what im doing in the future.

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